So I'm trying to "remix" every one of Sandra Simonds poems in Warsaw Bikini. All the titles and some of the poems are made using an anagram generator. I don't know if this is a stupid idea. I don't know if Sandra will hate this/hate me. Oh well. Here's the second one (i used this site):
green ties you
after I Serengeti You
otter slowly removed his hand off of the fox’s / his eyes focused on the raccoon trying to figure out hell
the only word that could physically come
there wasn’t a guideline to opening up a softer chest
the otter sapped the glow / promised to marry how it feels inside / and sapped ancestry from a pretty good head
“IT ISN’T TRUE”
... but the ground stayed intense to the moment of being opened again
a picture of Dakota formed behind hatred and bitterness / embracing the fox kindly
the muzzle lay soft where the wind knocked him
tears hover over two lovers and one thought / knocked it out of him / the air became cloth / mumbled downward and into the foxes trembling cleft
... but something happened
cold became a prize / the move forward quit for wanting / the air repeated it again / the otter shook / beads of lead were fluffed about his fur
and our jean were very very disturbed
1.9.09
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this is very, very disturbed----which is to say....thank you!!!
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