Rules (by Lacey Hunter)
must include:
a color 
i need to feel the wind
a moment in the supermarket 
the smell of lettuce
7.5 lines
(the first two were warm-ups)
#1 Boat Smell
I took a boat to the supermarket
and I heard lettuce snapping
sweat-rain & filth-rain under the bed
this organic cat / we recalled / is so 
breezy in his excellent wind gear / the hairs
in my skin were pressed and whispered 
to / the scary market 
#2 Orange
aisle 4 is full of blood again / I am 
so happy drunk and horny, cereal 
boxes & tang up against my palm / so the
room is painted for me / now magicians 
fuck under big lettuce letters 
spelling "LUCK IS WET" / yet I'm
still an asshole
#3 Francis Ford Copolla's Dishwasher
lettuce bungees my son's throat / yarns
of mashed potatoes and this is the 
wet placeholder of her body--a supermarket
burial and a sound flight against rotten 
into preciousness / first the engine then
chokes up dust / the moment the heart 
made a flat sound
#4 IWW
boy aboard the red and silk mills 
riding letters as in support / a mine
becomes dirt again / yet time, space
effectiveness, light / Mario humping a dryer
drum / clouds are fixed and the 
breeze kills us / now art collectors 
dig this lettuce
#5 Red & Black
Lenin's crooked donkey jaw breathes on 
my whiskers, tells me about sword & shield
birthdays / he / two colors of breathe 
one of which is lettuce / I try 
to kiss the lens / his eyes/ and 
he flees to a broken trunk / he
cowers like new mud
#6 J.B.
Josie becomes a red bird without shape
or no vocal jaw / she hops amongst 
the slope / not a banana dance /
but this man in a white hat kills her
making music history while 
napping / breath calling wind 
lettuce hair is desperate
27.1.09
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Very nice m'dear, very nice. I can feel the wind now (as it drapes itself on my lettuce).
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